2005-07-01 09:24:02 |
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I would like to agree with aynonomous about the men having the right of way, but the horney little bastard inside of me agrees with yoyoy, she should turn in to a lesbian rapist but she needs to kill the dad give the brother one more good fuck then kill him, and she needs to fuck her mom where are we in this world with out a little miltf huh? Have her turn lesbo that is the good stuff. And have her only kill a few others that she rapes because she needs a few should we say female companions on her sex journey to have a struggle in life with. Can I get an hurrah for the little peasant girl on girl lover 1st sergeant. |
2005-08-05 01:45:01 |
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Hey its me again, come on humans post your comments about this story. How is StBobo going to write us a good or even great part 6 to the Peasant Girl series or epic or whatever the hell you would like to call it. Who knows when he will be done we all need to give him a little information about our ideas on the issues of wench's sexual life. So post your comments everyone and have a ball. And remember you can eat fresh at Subway because the subs are made fresh right in front of you, even though the food sits out there on the counter in front of you all day rotting and crumbling up to a spoil as the genetically hybrid created flies walk apon the human flesh from the knives that cut the bread then flesh that the low wage not to mention low life employees use. The End! Good luck StBobo! |
2005-08-07 21:17:27 |
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Hmm interesting this seems to be the most comments you've gotten so far. I didn't even know you could break through the cervix so that gives you major props from me. People must understand her brother seems like the type who wants to please and be in everyone's favor. Even though he may appear to have feelings for her he still wants to share her and allow everyone to see just how great "his" little sister is. It's like a kid and their new favorite toy. You can play with for a little bit but remember it's still mine in the end. She seems more likely to run away then kill anyone and even that seems unlikely. She appears to be fully subjagated in my opinion. |
2005-09-05 00:28:49 |
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Pretty sure the ol' cervix bust is anatomically incorrect. You know bo, they did not have much in the way of birth control in the motherland. I agree with the whole 'only so many ways to fill an orfice' comment you made previously. The story is all about varying the characters and settings, or being able to find some little kink to work into peoples heads. Your stories are pretty structurally sound. Your dialogue has gotten a ton better, it is probably the thing I have to work on the hardest too. Keep writing. |
2005-09-10 15:57:42 |
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You Cant Just Friggn have her kill them, they would be able to take her easy, I say she fucks with some equipment and influences their deaths, like cut the breaks on their car or something, then travel with her mother and turn lesbo or something... |