| 2005-07-19 02:34:01 |
Perverted Kids
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Funbiy is gae just because your writings skills arent that good he shudnt give it a 1/10 I mean he couldnt write a story that good even if he spelled everything correctly. *You have just been bitch slapped* (8/10) |
| 2005-07-21 13:28:00 |
Perverted Kids
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You all suck. Every God-Damn one of you. Story was a bit sick in parts, but you get props for an avid imagination. Everybody else that commented on it can suck my fucking balls. 5/10 |
| 2005-07-25 20:30:49 |
Perverted Kids
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I loved your story, was a bit long. A little to perverted and hardcore for my taste but i loved it. Keep on writing. |
| 2005-07-27 07:27:55 |
Perverted Kids
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sicko... |
| 2005-07-29 00:13:27 |
Perverted Kids
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That story was a piece of shit, you're an awful writer, stop now. By the way, Snape kills Dumbledore on page 606. |