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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-10 00:29:53 | Defend yourself | well done i liked the changing of the stories between the sex and the fight scene very interesting. I don't know why you all are complaining about mistakes there weren't even that many. Beutiful story very nicely written 10/10 |
| 2005-11-09 22:05:10 | Defend yourself | i loved it. it wasnt what im used to reading, but i liked it./ |
| 2006-08-21 15:06:20 | Defend yourself | Great story. I has some problems, but about the only advice I can give is write more. The more you write the better you'll get. |
| 2006-08-23 05:54:57 | Defend yourself | many, many,many inexusable mistakes. i am an english teacher and although it made my panties (a little) wet, the grammer nearly killed me! |
| 2007-03-14 09:08:21 | Defend yourself | Don't usually like this kind of story but this one really turned me on!! Keep writing them |