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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2006-06-26 03:11:16 | september 25th | ya that was sortov weak dude. like a transvestite prostitue have sex with a shitting arrangatang weak. u could have worked on dialog alot more and put some actuall detail into the rest of the story instead of just the fucking. could have been worse though. |
2007-01-27 13:40:17 | september 25th | shit/fuck/pussy/cunt/learn tenses, paragraphing, sentence structuring. and spelling then maybe you will have somethhhhhing worth reading. |
2007-03-31 12:51:54 | september 25th | that sucked the major cock,,,definatley not a true story, dont try writing another one u suck when it comes to all aspects of ur writing, ur grammar, sentences and ur ideas for a fake story! |
2005-06-25 08:17:18 | Frank's Inner Woman | loved it gave it a 10 love to suck cock |
2005-06-25 18:17:59 | Frank's Inner Woman | Good story gave it a ten and a load on the chair write somemore i love it |