| 2006-05-18 01:45:04 |
Niece brother and sister
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absolute rubbish |
| 2007-09-29 13:42:24 |
Niece brother and sister
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lol Hey i knew it only when i was 12 xD and did the ahem thing whrn i was ya 12 too |
| 2005-06-28 03:21:06 |
true experience with sister in law
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what a load of shite...learn english before you start trying to convince us of your escapades. i am pretty sure that you are pounding the meat as if its someone that owes you money! utter crap! |
| 2005-06-28 05:53:45 |
true experience with sister in law
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Couldnt have put it better myself, i agree with you Tie My Shoe. Make it more suspensful, and go into more detail. Learn how to spell and you will be nearly there! |
| 2005-06-30 03:43:45 |
true experience with sister in law
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stud is not a verb moron, but my favorite line of this is "So she served me a plate with rice and chicken" also, along with grammar, you should learn how to use paragraphs. 1/10 I would give you less, but hey, common sense doesn't require grammar skills so I'll let you figure it out. |