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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-07-14 12:20:05 | service 1 | Good start but the story is really pointless without the 2nd part. Come with it quickly. |
2005-07-27 11:41:41 | service 1 | Your writing "voice" is strong and confident. There are few if any distractions from spelling, punctuatuion, or grammer errors. As a result you are able to pull readers into your stories and make your characters believable. I hope you continue this one.... |
2005-08-01 10:15:33 | service 1 | write it, write it now |
2005-10-17 22:31:11 | service 1 | hey, where's part II? |
2005-10-22 17:08:38 | service 1 | very good at least a 9/10 keep writing your good at it |