| 2005-06-29 12:28:13 |
A Little Romance
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Okay story but was very short... keep writing |
| 2005-07-01 11:20:12 |
A Little Romance
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Keepim cumming, A great story, but a little short like everything less. Rates eight stars, but the author has a great flar for story telling. |
| 2005-07-15 23:14:44 |
A Little Romance
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It was a great story until you mentioned the bi thing not everyone wants to hear that, but keep writing |
| 2005-11-15 01:57:42 |
A Little Romance
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ok i have about 100 comments for you. 1)not a very good background for a romance 2) not really all that interesting, not many details. 3) the whole bi thing isnt really called for, and 4-100) it was way too short. do not write a story unless you are gonna put some time and effort into it. |
| 2005-07-17 10:13:41 |
Fantasies: Ch. 6 Coming to school, Part 2
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veryvery dumb |