| 2005-11-09 14:03:00 |
Autumn pt 5
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I'll say it again. The writing is great but the stories have gone down hill since your first one. |
| 2005-11-15 23:16:53 |
Autumn pt 5
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I'm sorry but if anything other than Paul arriving to shoot them happens then i'd have to agree that this has gone way downhill! |
| 2005-11-18 12:41:28 |
Autumn pt 5
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Chimera is right if Paul doesn't come and shoot their guts out, this story is about to start stinking |
| 2005-11-27 20:02:48 |
Autumn pt 5
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So when are you going to write the next one???? I would love to read it and see what happens... it turns me on..... i love all the details just love them!! please write real soon i can not wait |
| 2005-12-08 21:25:33 |
Autumn pt 5
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this made me sick...I almost couldn't finish.I would have gone to the police and report him. |