| 2005-07-15 15:10:24 |
The Rain pt. 1
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good!! |
| 2005-08-02 18:42:45 |
The Rain pt. 1
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hey, have you ever heard of paragraphs? Write in paragraphs, break up this ridiculous unending tale. Awful. Terrible. |
| 2005-11-19 09:05:03 |
The Rain pt. 1
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1/10 pure crap |
| 2005-11-20 15:40:32 |
The Rain pt. 1
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Whoever that asshole is who signed on as Oogman and then said Pure crap, 1/10, I need you all to know that wasn't me. I never use the word crap, so I know it wasn't me. But the story wasn't much, to be sure. 2/10 |
| 2006-04-20 16:20:27 |
The Rain pt. 1
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A good story but hard to read because there are no paragraphs. good beginning, but too often the word "drift" |