| 2004-06-28 07:10:28 |
Dark side of Mother
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That was a piss-poor story! Oh, and the grammar was terrible. |
| 2004-07-19 03:03:16 |
Dark side of Mother
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U R strange! |
| 2004-08-07 03:59:27 |
Dark side of Mother
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This wasn't good, u could do better |
| 2004-08-22 18:02:33 |
Dark side of Mother
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Think I could rewrite this pce. of crap and make to a much better tale with better grammar, word usage, spelling, punctuation and decent dialogue with lots of nasty stuff coming from the boys and eventually from mon's cum smeared lips and tongue. The last two paragraphs could be expanded into about 10 to 20 paragraphs filled with more detailed erotic description of double teamed fucking and sucking of this middle-aged slut mother. |
| 2004-10-09 17:04:05 |
Dark side of Mother
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This story started out good, but was very lacking in details. It would have made a good cinemax movie. |