| 2005-07-18 04:57:43 |
Sally, My Niece
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brilliant story, when is part 2? |
| 2005-07-18 09:47:29 |
Sally, My Niece
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Very well done. |
| 2005-07-18 09:58:06 |
Sally, My Niece
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Seriously you spent for fifths of the story setting the scene then one or two paragraphs for ALL of the action. Im giving you a 3 just out of pure frustration and disgust for your lack of vision. |
| 2005-07-18 12:39:33 |
Sally, My Niece
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Oh shut up sock man, I have 19 nipples for heavns sake. |
| 2005-07-18 13:09:01 |
Sally, My Niece
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dont describe the other shit it wastes the story but well done anywa when u got into it it was fantastic keep writing |