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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-07-10 23:13:51 | Home alone_(0) | I thought the story was wicked i loved it ......i really hope you make another one ...i mean it left me in suspense i can't wait to find out what happens next ...I REALLY HOPE YOU MAKE PART 2 !! long story short LOVED IT! and write part 2 |
2005-07-11 02:14:23 | Home alone_(0) | make part 2 |
2005-07-11 03:56:11 | Home alone_(0) | I didnt like it at all >_> No structure or anything. You need to go fuck yourself, you prick monkey asshole. |
2005-07-11 10:27:05 | Home alone_(0) | it was pritty good, the pins werent right, needs to be longer, few grammer errors. but i would like to know waht happens later... like make the mom and dad see them sleeping togeather or something, more detail in next one as well over all its probley a 6/10 |
2005-07-12 14:30:18 | Home alone_(0) | Loved the story, only plz, next time don't make him so brutal, but love the rape portion. No aunts or girlfriends or anything else also cuz that's just gettin a little bit gross and stupid like some other stories. I think that the girl should still fight back her bro though cuz it makes the story more exciting. Maybe an assfucking next time? DEFINITELY MAKE A PART 2!!!! |