| 2004-03-24 04:50:12 |
Salvation chapter 3
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It was a bit too much like a soap opera for me but otherwise a good story. The spelling and grammar should have been checked before being submitted. |
| 2004-04-20 22:08:24 |
Salvation chapter 3
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REMINDS ME OF THE FIRST TIME I FUCKED..................................................................... A MONKEY |
| 2006-05-29 11:59:22 |
Salvation chapter 3
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finally some action |
| 2007-05-29 16:10:42 |
Salvation chapter 3
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Its a nice story ,i like ur concept very much, keep it up. |
| 2006-05-29 12:08:56 |
Salvation chapter 4
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Jeez and I am still reading hoping for more |