| 2007-12-31 02:34:47 |
when i was thirteen_(0)
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good story but there is uch thing as the "enter" button |
| 2005-07-16 00:13:57 |
SARON ME AND CHRISTINE PT 4
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Too short, son. not too well writed, either. 3/10 |
| 2005-07-16 03:53:07 |
SARON ME AND CHRISTINE PT 4
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You need to make it last a bit longer. Stretch it out, and talk describe the woman getting fucked a bit better. The love making when he is taking her in the ass as well. WOrk on it. 5/10 |
| 2005-08-01 23:12:17 |
SARON ME AND CHRISTINE PT 4
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boo |
| 2006-12-23 05:40:05 |
SARON ME AND CHRISTINE PT 4
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short, no plot, no lead in, nothing worth reading1/10 |