| 2004-03-02 07:03:25 |
Kaeri and Me
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This has the makings of a great story but you must develope it better or you will never be a great writter. |
| 2004-03-13 15:49:09 |
Kaeri and Me
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If you the full version of this story and a bunch of other stories go to a site called hiddenserver |
| 2004-03-25 12:55:33 |
Kaeri and Me
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Try a site called sexstoriespost |
| 2004-04-10 12:36:25 |
Kaeri and Me
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needs work. Try adding more description. And more of the Bro and Sis. Otherwise, spell-check, grammar-check, and proofread and it will be good. |
| 2004-06-14 23:00:21 |
Kaeri and Me
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Wekk, you started godd, but left us hanging.... |