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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-01-18 22:14:07 | me and my younger cousin | pretty good story...it's just sad because you have such great ideas but, as you admitted, not the greatest writing abilities. Just a few tips... use way more paragraph breaks, slow down a lot and try being a little more descriptive. Still, like i said, you obliviously have good story ideas. 8/10. check out some of my work now and tell me what YOU think of mine. |
| 2006-01-18 22:14:07 | me and my younger cousin | WOW! Thanks, with writing like this you can only 'go far'! Let's hear about the sister, PLEASE! |
| 2006-02-28 23:49:22 | me and my younger cousin | fucking right more |
| 2006-03-02 16:03:44 | me and my younger cousin | Exellent story mate! |
| 2006-03-23 22:25:06 | me and my younger cousin | I love it |