| 2005-08-15 23:33:55 |
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update the next chapter i wanna find out how it ends so fuckin bad lol |
| 2005-09-05 00:50:04 |
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You know what would have been neat Bo, though a hell of a lot of work for you, would be to have had all the characters speak in period vernacular. I would have liked a little more description of Noor, she sounds hot. Kudos. |
| 2005-09-06 19:45:00 |
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Period vernacular? Like in Russian? I don't think there would be much of an audience for that, even if I was a Russian scholar, which I'm not. I've tried to make it sound as period as possible, but Tolstoy, Dostoyevski, etc. didn't write much porn, and any that they did write hasn't been translated, so I'm winging most of that vernacular, if that's what you mean. |
| 2006-08-07 10:42:35 |
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Coo' |
| 2006-08-29 20:50:42 |
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i am incredibly impressed. i never come to this site expecting anything other than poor grammar and no paragraphs, but on occasion i am pleasantly suprised with a piece that's breath-taking. don't settle for calling this porn. it's something beyond clumsy masturbatory fantasy. i'm sitting here fully clothed, reading these like a novel. have you ever thought about anything, i mean in a professional capacity? i would, if i were you. |