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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2006-06-01 15:32:08 | The New guy on the team | man great story pre cum is ooze |
| 2007-08-24 02:42:15 | The New guy on the team | nice |
| 2008-03-08 18:24:52 | The New guy on the team | Loved it keep writing!! |
| 2005-07-23 10:35:44 | Sophi | I like the format, but you chose a very difficult one. A very few times, I forgot that you were writing a letter to your love, and not telling a story. She was there. She knows what happened. Like I said. Difficult format. You started out great with the descriptions, until you came to body parts. You went from "smoldering inferno that I was building within your bosoms. (very nice, and it fit the story.) to "I touched your clit." (It just didn't seem to fit.) All in all a great story, and a refreshing format. 8/10 |
| 2005-07-24 00:42:05 | Sophi | boooooooooring. |