| 2005-08-21 00:44:35 |
My First Sex Part 1
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yea wow she did her brother, this is a load of bullshit come up with better storys u suck |
| 2005-08-23 02:05:31 |
My First Sex Part 1
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best story i've ever read, god wish i could get a house sitting job like that!! |
| 2005-08-23 12:56:58 |
My First Sex Part 1
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Good writing! Work on your grammar, like the proper application of there and their, stuff like that. You could be a really great writer. Reminds me of my first time, only I didn't get to tap her ass. Maybe next life! |
| 2005-08-26 02:17:52 |
My First Sex Part 1
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i dont care how unrealistic it was but best storie ive read so far |
| 2005-08-26 07:31:30 |
My First Sex Part 1
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wow o man good storey would be better if wendy was a bit older on and by the way fuk off bull shit just cause u cant write 8/10 |