| 2005-07-31 12:25:59 |
Bled on Me
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you mother fuckin asshole you dum perverted fag go kill yourself. |
| 2005-08-01 03:28:17 |
Bled on Me
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More. The blood was a nice touch. But it seemed like you got too excited in the beginning. More build up and emotional trauma would be a lot better. I'll be looking for more. |
| 2005-08-01 20:51:47 |
Bled on Me
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As silly and sad (this isn't the type of story that gets me off) as this story is, and unfortunately badly written (the tenses are messed up and the rythm isn't smooth), you guys, this is the rape category. Most of the stories here are with girls who end up enjoying being "raped" which is totally unrealistic. So, you're in the damn category, which by your logic makes YOU sick. |
| 2005-08-27 21:54:35 |
Bled on Me
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You're a sick bastard and I hope someone cuts off your cock. |
| 2005-08-29 01:14:02 |
Bled on Me
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hey man, decent story. BUT you people out there that talk hella shit, u saw the categories, and u knew what u were about to read... dont rag on the guy just for the fuck of it.. if u knew some shit like this was gonna be in it, why read it? u dumb asses make me fucking sick... u tlak shit about him being sick. your sick for getting on his ass about writing. some people just have things they wanna right about.. u wouldnt talk shit if someone like stephen king wrote something like this in his stories |