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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2007-11-16 00:46:40 | The Flintstones | Great story!!! Please do the jetsons with judy, George, and Jane |
2008-01-20 10:28:21 | The Flintstones | dude that rock and u shuld do and incest 1 with the jetsons and do some of that yugioh and pokemon show that wuld rock |
2008-02-24 01:10:26 | The Flintstones | good job and keep it up -The Crimson King |
2005-07-29 08:22:43 | Valedictorian Blackmail | Quite well done. There should be a followup story, containing the details of what the teacher is planning to do with those photos. |
2005-07-29 19:52:14 | Valedictorian Blackmail | Or how about not a follow up story where he uses the photographs. Scretch your imagination and come up with something original. Otherwise it'll be this exact story: "Chelsea," Said Mr. Jones the next day, "I've got the photos of you on your knees infront of my desk with your tits hanging out and your face covered in cum. If you don't fuck me again, whenever and however I want, I"ll show them to your parents/students/grandma and your dog." "Okay," Chelsea says, knowing she has no other choice. "My place or yours." Don't do that. We've seen that. Oh and if you're writing numbers like "9 1/2 inches" It really should be spelled out. Nine and a half inches. Beyond that, your story is good for what it is, but what it is isn't all that special. –S– |