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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-01 18:52:55 | Andrea's weekend | Ya know, you could at least keep your story right. At one part you state she likes silk against her skin, so she doesn't wear a bra. 7 or 8 paragraphs later she has small breasts and a bra on. What the heck? |
| 2005-08-01 19:46:57 | Andrea's weekend | It was a great story, but like the other guys said. It was extremely hard to follow. Hell at some points it said stuff that made it look like she was eating herself out...if you could translate the story and make sense of it, it is great. Just takes too much thinking for most simple minded people that get on here. I suggest you fix all the problems with it. Re-read it, and have a friend read it. Find all the errors and shit that makes no sense. Then it will be a damn good story. |
| 2005-11-06 12:34:01 | Andrea's weekend | I gotta agree with "That One Dude". Of course I was still able to follow it pretty well and I liked it. 7/10 |
| 2005-11-08 21:57:15 | Andrea's weekend | uhh guys, obviously you havnt read enough porn. it was SIMPLE to follow, hell i could follow it EASILY when my mind was filled with lust. I liked it, was VERY hot, although I'd have liked to have seen more anal strapon action. and conch, you dumb shit *smiles sweetly*, OBVIOUSLY you are a virgin in the pornographic literature department since you bitched about spelling and grammer. This is PORN you idiot! on a semi shady site as well! :-P if you want GOOD spelling and grammer, go to literotica! xnxx is NOT a stickler for grammer etc, so shut the FUCK up and jerk yourself off like everyone else. |
| 2006-01-28 15:28:26 | Andrea's weekend | it SUCKED |