| 2005-08-03 10:46:49 |
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have you ever heard of paragraphs? |
| 2005-08-03 22:35:40 |
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yall are some serious dumbasses... you dont come to critisize on someone's writing ability, you come to read PORN... not to comment on someone's story... just read and finger/jack your self... mmk fuck heads |
| 2005-08-04 15:42:52 |
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Did this guy drop out of kindergarten or something? |
| 2005-08-05 01:52:23 |
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Dude what the fuck?!?!?!......"Omost"?!?!... its not always nine months OverlyCritial.....some r born earlyer......and why the fuck u put that in a fictional story anyway?!?!? DUMB FUCK!!! |
| 2005-08-05 22:43:57 |
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that was sooooo bad. just wow. the most annoying thing was that the word is "almost' not "omost" u stupid dumbass. shove your pencil up your ass and never write again |