| 2005-08-15 04:12:15 |
Nicki
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this story was awsome and i have to give it a 12/10 because that is how many orgasms i had just from reading this story. please make a part two. |
| 2005-08-16 10:09:45 |
Nicki
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I had a great time reading this story. Every bit of it was worthwhile. If the bondage folks had a writing award, you should get it. It was like intro to bondage, or something. Fine writing... |
| 2005-08-16 14:47:52 |
Nicki
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Great porn! But I agree with Lady Teacher - Steve is not the brightest bulb in the chandelier - he surely could have avoided that rape charge if he had used his head as well as his cock when the jealous woman found out he was fucking those 12 yr old girls & wanted some fun too. The least he could have done for her was suck her cunt while one of the kids sucked his cock. If the young ones didn’t know how to suck cock I am sure that jealous woman would have been glad to teach them! Now - - let’s get dopey Steve’s cock into little Nicki’s cunt & asshole! |
| 2005-08-20 13:55:26 |
Nicki
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i was half asleep by the time GI Joe got around to the sex. Next time you write don't bother with allllllll the family history and stairs |
| 2005-08-21 01:34:53 |
Nicki
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Great story. It was well written. The family details at the start of the story led into it, making it more easy to understand and follow. Also it helped with the suspense. Keeping the readers on edge to when it would get to sexual stuff. So great story. Im actually going to rate it a 10. Keep up the good work. |