| 2007-06-24 03:44:06 |
Jaime's Pleasure Package
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dam good story. could have been a little longer though. keep it up 9/10 |
| 2007-10-21 05:14:56 |
Jaime's Pleasure Package
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OMG!!!! LOVED IT!!! WHERE'S PART 2?? |
| 2007-10-21 19:32:39 |
Jaime's Pleasure Package
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ok, part two by this november, hopefully... |
| 2005-08-18 19:36:41 |
Nightly Visit
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Too short and way too one sided. u need to pleasure her also. so don't be jerk dude: love is made with and by 2 people. Don't write any more, until u can do her also, then tell us all about it. |
| 2005-08-19 00:19:53 |
Nightly Visit
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its a good story for a start. done listen to rude one he is just pist cause he or she couldnt get horny and thats why they make bad comments. keep writing and what happenes is part ttwo. great story |