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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-08 11:26:55 | Gay sex on my honeymoon! Part 3 | This is a total waste of good computer space, give up while the going is good........ |
| 2005-08-12 00:34:42 | Gay sex on my honeymoon! Part 3 | Please learn how to write. We are glad this is a short story. Yur story line is ok, but u need to dwell a bit on the details, more about the sex, how it feels, what were u feeling, being a gay slut. Discipline is necesary to good writing. Add more words. r |
| 2005-08-14 00:09:25 | Gay sex on my honeymoon! Part 3 | well, for one thing, i'm a lover of black cock, so your story so far has been fun for me, but the others are right, need more description, it would be better that way, and this wasn't my favorite part, i like the other two better, so i hope part 4 is better |
| 2005-08-19 18:52:13 | Gay sex on my honeymoon! Part 3 | i luved it! i wear thongs just like fag should. |
| 2007-01-17 01:35:07 | Gay sex on my honeymoon! Part 3 | fuck you rudystahrman and Good God! who the fuck are you to tell him how he should write, i dont see you writing anything that anyone would give a shit about. drop dead and burn in hell mother fuckers, i checked rudystahrman out and he's just a fucken 60 yr old racist pervert, and Good God sounds like your just pissed you havent gotten a little action for a while p.s. nice story jeff, im a girl and even i enjoyed it |