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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-23 01:32:39 | The Teacher_(0) | HA! that is the most sophomoric and unbelievable story ive ever heard. It was a good story line but u ran away with ur imagination. Not even Jenna Jameson of Ron Jeremy could pull off that shit. It is also true what prober said...they dont make a 150mm lens for a 35mm camera. There are also many discrepancies (that means differences for u dumbasses) between what u said in the story, whats fact, and what u said in ur replies. First, people dont cum like 15 times in a few hours. Second, why would ur old photography teacher help u with this endeavor if he saw the pictures when he was developing them? Third, u say u learned english from an indiana university professor with no high school education...and i dont think a ged will get u into indiana. This brings me to a very important subjec |
| 2005-08-23 01:45:07 | The Teacher_(0) | A lot of people debate on if grammar is important or not. I believe grammar is important to writing because it keeps the story flowing and understandable. Poor grammar confuses and frustrate those with a higher education. But the story makes the story...not the grammar. You shouldn't rate a good story 1/10 purely on the grammar. It should be about the story, which in this case was very unbelievable (in a bad way). I rate it a 10/10 for the effort and story idea, 3/10 on the fact the whole story was based on a fallacy (again...that means falsehood or lie for the other retards like you), and a 2/10 for the grammar. Overall i give it a 5/10 |
| 2005-08-23 02:04:43 | The Teacher_(0) | ya real story psh |
| 2005-08-23 13:34:49 | The Teacher_(0) | first of all this happened in the mid to late 70's i cant remember for sure how big the lens was 150, 180 all ican say is that it was a longer lens that i used to take the pics with and i took my ged before my class was out of school and went into the navy when i got out i took my sat and did well enough on it to go to college i went to a 2 year school where i had a professer from the universty of ILLINOIS in english comp 102 i got a 95 in that class as far as cumming as much as i did i did i dont give a rats ass what any of you jack off motherfuckers think or say i cant do it now that im in my mid 40's but i can fuck 2 times in an hour still and 3 or 4 times in a night i work out and take good vitamins so if you dont think that im telling the truth dont fucking read it and go the fuck awa |
| 2005-08-23 15:41:19 | The Teacher_(0) | True story?? I am surprised you didn’t say you had a 14" cock as most of you "true story" writers do. Besides that story sucked anyway, no build up and a shit ending and don't get me started on your grammar. PS. If this is really true, give me your name and in 10 minuets I can find out if you were really in the navy. |