| 2005-08-19 01:02:11 |
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what is this all about. If I wanted to read the book I would read it. Where is the action |
| 2005-11-28 19:08:02 |
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for all those who cant see he is setting the sceen for later stories, who cares about the lack of sex as long as when it comes it makes sense. every1 would say its shit if harry suddenly started fucking mrs Weasley for no reason, keep the stories coming mate |
| 2005-12-22 17:50:55 |
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i wrote as "nice" in the previous chapter, forgot to check if there were more... and yea, i dun mind if there aint action now, as long as it's good later on, keep em coming |
| 2006-01-31 23:08:48 |
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actually i find this very interesting, i mean i know there isnt a lot of fucking but your details and the way that you are setting it up looks like that this could actually part of the story, very well written, keep it up |
| 2006-06-04 18:53:47 |
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your ratings would go up if there was more sex, especially since most readers are looking to bash one off as they read. |