| 2005-08-14 00:27:56 |
Sally My Niece, Pulling things together
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Im glad to finally read part 4. I thought it was great. I love this little story coming along...keep them coming!!!Please.10/10 |
| 2005-08-14 03:03:52 |
Sally My Niece, Pulling things together
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Good. Only serious recomendation would be to work on spacing a little, Double space between paragraphs, easier to read, and number the chapters to help later readers keep tack. |
| 2005-08-14 10:53:38 |
Sally My Niece, Pulling things together
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Oustanding story. What this other readers dont understand is that girls start fucking at 13 now, so Sally has an understandable amount of Knowledge. Keep them cumming. 10/10 |
| 2005-08-14 11:41:10 |
Sally My Niece, Pulling things together
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i love your stories. |
| 2005-08-14 15:55:38 |
Sally My Niece, Pulling things together
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Thanks all for the comments...good and bad... I do take them all into consideration. There are still 2 more installments that have been submitted. I hope I'm able to please at least most who read them. |