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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-16 13:49:02 | One year after our first time | Tongue is spelled the way I did, Not enuf developement of the story line, let's have some effing emotion, feelings, erotica, etc. something more exciting than just wham bam thank u maam. U need practice, keep writing |
| 2005-08-16 18:52:08 | One year after our first time | can you spell paragraph? 5/10 |
| 2005-08-16 19:31:10 | One year after our first time | 3/10 |
| 2005-08-18 22:06:48 | One year after our first time | Lame |
| 2005-09-01 16:07:06 | One year after our first time | cute, but the spelling is terrible |