| 2005-08-30 12:09:42 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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dude, your so fucked in the head. the reason people read these stories is because they are hot. you can't throw a main character in jail thats what they do in real life this is fiction. i could have just watched a god damn cop show. on the other hand the rest of it is brilliant |
| 2005-08-30 20:11:31 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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great ending...what happens when you get out of prison though???? |
| 2005-08-30 23:46:29 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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Hey - what kind of cruel, stupid law is that! Not able to fuck until age 18 is ridiculous. I don't know a girl in my school who hasn't fucked before she was 18 years old. What kind of country does this guy live in? |
| 2005-08-31 17:45:54 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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I see I got the reaction I expected...LOL Just a little trip off the beaten path is all. There are more coming out that might be more to your liking. |
| 2005-08-31 19:23:53 |
Sally My Niece, My down fall
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wdh? what way is that to end a story? two things: first off: fuck the police! they are unable to place cameras in anyones house at any time without a search warrant! Is is a federal offense, heavy conspiracy charges and invasion of private affairs and property! thats jail time for police, believe it or not. 2nd of all: if the girls are 16, they are allowed to have sex legally in this country, not 18. u wanted a realistic story? think this next time. i was a huge fan of the series up until now. learn to write stories, please!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |