| 2005-08-21 05:05:47 |
Your Trip - (For Men)
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rubish same story for both boring and badly written time wasted pretending to write if u were the person and u cant be male and female unless you have.......................... |
| 2005-09-04 12:09:26 |
Your Trip - (For Men)
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Actually, I would disagree with the former, it is a good story, it is well written, but the dual personality of telling it twice from different points of view does throw it off, but this is a good version of it. |
| 2005-09-12 04:28:17 |
Your Trip - (For Men)
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Ever hear or grammar? |
| 2005-10-05 22:55:40 |
Your Trip - (For Men)
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A 10 and maybe the only one ive ever read on here btw. I wouldnt change a thing, its great but in the moring after sleeping with my cock between your legs all nite id roll you over and slow fuck your cute little ass for the frist time ever. nice and slow so you could feel my cock grow inside of you and strech you wider then youve ever been before. but thats just me. 10 / 10 keep it up please !!!!!!!!!!! |
| 2007-11-03 17:47:00 |
Your Trip - (For Men)
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I thought it was a below-average writing effort in dire need of better grammar, spelling and style. 6/10 |