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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-08-23 06:49:47 | Jason's Diary | I'm with Sanction. There are these little things in English we call 'tenses' ie. past, present, future. Learn them. Use them. I'm not even going to get started on the many other, various abuses you have inflicted upon the language here. |
| 2005-08-30 03:25:43 | Jason's Diary | One of the worse writings I have ever read... maybe a decent plot but a very poor job writing it... Try again but improve |
| 2005-09-09 14:38:37 | Jason's Diary | Get a better grasp of English and how to use it. u gotta 9 for the story idea. r |
| 2005-11-02 08:53:05 | Jason's Diary | 9/10 |
| 2005-11-02 13:09:57 | Jason's Diary | GETA FUCKIN GF U FCKIN QUEER! |