| 2008-02-03 00:29:59 |
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Good, but most stories fall short when written from the third person. Try writing it from Alex's perspective. otherwise, 7/10, good job. |
| 2008-02-03 22:06:06 |
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In the next chapter the father should kick your ass, then kick all of you out of the house and the three of you should move in together and fuck alot. I was about to cum and then I read about a finger in your ass and it killed it. NO MALE ANAL NEXT TIME! |
| 2008-02-20 09:59:43 |
Sibling Orgy
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damn that was awesome my cousins did that only difference was we never got caught |
| 2008-03-12 13:10:10 |
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wow i am so distusted but it would be fun to do it with my sister aswell |
| 2008-03-20 13:46:47 |
Sibling Orgy
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Great story. Now get parents involved. Get both sisters and mother pregnut by brother and father. A grear story or stories can and should be developed. |