| 2005-08-25 15:10:46 |
sweetmom fall in love
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dam that story got me soo hard i was jacking off to it !! MILFS OWN YOU |
| 2005-08-25 23:33:28 |
sweetmom fall in love
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big member, you faggot, thats from mind of mencia. way to be orignal |
| 2005-08-27 06:29:24 |
sweetmom fall in love
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I LIKE mom like uuuu .i like fucking women +40 .good con...... ian wating for next1 ,0/10 |
| 2005-08-27 07:15:38 |
sweetmom fall in love
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i m really very very wet my ur hot story u fucky mom |
| 2005-08-27 16:47:28 |
sweetmom fall in love
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Decent, not great. A lot of cliches, not a very sophisticated writing style. The dialogue needs work. She habitually looks at net porn, but has not masturbated in 4 years? Writing is a craft, it takes practice, keep trying though, the spark is definately there. |