| 2005-08-24 21:49:55 |
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good one !! |
| 2005-08-26 13:16:16 |
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This is a good turn of the story telling here on this site, something different from everyone fucking their sisters or mothers. Super story, 10 out of 10 points, can't wait for part 2 |
| 2005-08-26 14:54:24 |
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This is probably one of the first actual 'stories' I've seen on here. Kudos to you. Well done.
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| 2005-08-26 17:31:20 |
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As others have said, your story injected a fresh air of normalcy into this forum; too many others write disgusting tales of incest and whatnot. Gone, it seems, is the truly erotic, slightly perverted, always enticing story like your own. This is the first I've read by you, and I must congradulate you for decent writing and a quasi-respectable plot. I hope you keep writing and I chance upon your stories again. All best. |
| 2005-08-29 16:38:33 |
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I liked it, but shouldn't he get someone else if Odette is carried off by someone her age? |