| 2005-08-26 23:52:41 |
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Well gothic vamp i thank you very much for the kind words and the great rating.....Just trying to spread the word on how wonderful it can be making love to a chubby older woman, as I know you and I have ... many thanks my friend...... |
| 2005-08-27 00:04:51 |
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Again you succeeded in making me hot with this great story.......I still want you one more time, Rusty!!! Hot, Hot, Hot!!!!!! Sizzling like you....... |
| 2005-08-28 10:55:44 |
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RR The stories were pretty good. You need to work on the sentence structure a little bit. Don't use so much of the ".....". Also, if you are going to use dialect for part of the narrative, you need to stay with it. Still, it was good, keep writing. |
| 2005-08-31 12:51:27 |
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aw c'mon! more, more! |
| 2005-09-01 14:59:01 |
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"Been there " I have to. and it was just great...My son treats me like a queen, and he is my knight in shining armor , and has been since he was 14......I just love these true stories , that are posted as fiction....I know better, .. I've been there. and it's truly wonderful...A. MOM |