| 2005-09-10 09:33:51 |
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dude this story is great, maKE ANOTHER ASAP i mean jesus im saving this story for later lol |
| 2005-09-11 18:40:48 |
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as a member of a april august relationship I lived a near experience thank you |
| 2005-09-14 05:55:38 |
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awesome , luved it , when is the part two coming on ,lets have them make luv on ther beach ... |
| 2005-10-29 22:50:52 |
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i agree with everybody, this story was about sex, but it was so much more than just sex. It was beautifully written, and i look forward to more work from you. 10/10 |
| 2005-11-03 11:23:55 |
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enjoyed it beyond anything i've read recently. tahnk you george. |