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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-01 15:39:06 | ONE SEXY GYM TEACHER (Part 1) | like they say about three lawyers on the ocean bottom, a good start. |
| 2005-09-01 16:18:38 | ONE SEXY GYM TEACHER (Part 1) | Tre' Bien. Good story, good language, the charector has a good voice. Develope the teacher more, why him, why there. One trick I use when I post stories here is to write the story in Word, then copy and paste to here. That way you can retain all of the paragraph formatting stuff that is so crucial to clarity. Keep writing. |
| 2005-09-01 17:06:29 | ONE SEXY GYM TEACHER (Part 1) | Hhahah did you go to satellite high school lmao |
| 2005-09-01 21:21:43 | ONE SEXY GYM TEACHER (Part 1) | Think about what yu are writing even thogh yu said it wasn't a tru story, doesn't mean yu have to make it a fantasy. Make it sound more realistic 6/10 |
| 2005-09-01 21:49:44 | ONE SEXY GYM TEACHER (Part 1) | I also want to encourage you to keep writing--you show definite potential. But I got news for you: sexual intercourse is NOT, in and of itself, the very definition of love. |