| 2008-03-17 16:16:32 |
Naruto's Curiosity
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i love all yaoi anime fanfics. Naruto is best paired with Kakashi, Sasuke, and Gaara. Or maybe they should all just have a four-some. mmmmmmmmmm ^_^ |
| 2008-04-06 00:16:42 |
Naruto's Curiosity
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beter then any yaoi that ive read in all my years |
| 2005-09-09 15:11:56 |
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As Peter probably discovered from comments on his previous story, he is leading a sheltered life. Why does he write stories like this if he doesn't have a hankering for infidelity? |
| 2005-09-17 00:46:47 |
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Peter - you're an asshole for moralizing when you write porn, but 10/10 for talented story-telling. wish other pricks who write trash for this site new a story has a beginning, middle & end - and I don't mean shove it in, friction, & spray which is about all some stories are about.. |
| 2005-09-17 01:06:51 |
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Nice story, peter. But I'm not on your side. Deedee had a great time as far as I could tell. She went back for more didn't she? Hell, I got so into the story I had to help myself cum, so what's wrong with fantasy? |