| 2005-09-14 17:03:11 |
My first sex with my dog Tommy
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It would have been better if you would spell better..2/10 |
| 2005-09-16 02:17:06 |
My first sex with my dog Tommy
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Horrible, the worst I've read and that's saying something. |
| 2005-09-18 10:57:25 |
My first sex with my dog Tommy
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try encouragement rather than zingers. not a bad first attempt. clean up your spelling and you'll have a nice story |
| 2005-09-23 09:46:33 |
My first sex with my dog Tommy
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horrible. just horrible |
| 2005-10-01 08:52:24 |
My first sex with my dog Tommy
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The story felt very honest and true to life. Grammar may be important, but don't dress up the story more than you want. I think your writing is great. Please submit more. |