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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-22 01:13:18 | Ann's Boat Ride - Chp 1 | finish it..................please!... |
| 2005-09-12 11:58:31 | The normal way | You pretty much hit every one of my pet peeves with this story. Structure counts, if we cannot tell where sentences and paragraphs are, how can we understand the story. Your dialogue was very primative, your descriptions were juvenile, it just was not very entertaining. read some Hemmingway and try again. |
| 2005-09-12 14:58:28 | The normal way | to comment writer "Archaic": You're a worse speller than some of the so-called sex story "authors." Come on, guy, Hemingway has only one "M." and "primitive" doesn't contain an "A." The story wasn't bad at all, I thought. 7/10. |
| 2005-09-14 13:46:13 | The normal way | Not bad at all.....made me cum! Who gives a shit about sentence structure? If we were reading for literary purposes we wouldn't be reading free porn stories online. This story is sexy and that's what matters to me! 7/10 |
| 2006-01-03 08:35:31 | The normal way | Hey, I really loved you short, Sweet, and sexeriffic story..I ssure wish you would tell us some more of you getting your wet, Hot Pussy filled, first with his big dick and then with his cum.. A Hot Stud seeking aFillie in Heat.. |