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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-19 22:08:53 | troi's holo adventure | most awesome your others were just as awesome 10/10 i just realized but this is the 1st comment in 2007 so go me :) |
| 2005-09-13 16:30:09 | beverly's holo fantasy | reformat this one. too vertical. it's like reading bad poetry. another one that's been floating about the web, now added to the mighty, mighty files of xnxx. |
| 2005-09-14 16:54:54 | beverly's holo fantasy | Definately work on the format. A good story though. You need to be careful when you play around with pre existing charecters, there is a danger that your audiance will come after you with pitchforks and torches if they feel the beloved fantasy has been compromised. Keep writing. |
| 2005-12-25 11:24:27 | beverly's holo fantasy | cool!well done. and as a long-time trekkie,ican tellyou that you've got nothing to worry about! |
| 2006-08-24 00:40:45 | beverly's holo fantasy | very good! as for the "pitchforks n torches", more likely daktarg's n toy phasers... |