| 2005-09-29 22:57:42 |
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nice work, keep it up!!! |
| 2005-09-30 12:32:09 |
Quadruplets-Part 2
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It was a great story, but it needed more than wut it had. You had the basic theme down, but u need to have more sex and less sexy talk between the quads. Overall though, it was a great story and I a, waiting for part 3. Fair rating: 9/10 PEACE OUT! |
| 2005-09-30 20:27:10 |
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For all of you fags who think I rate my own stories, I say shut the fuck up, I dont rate my stories, thats what you are for. |
| 2005-09-30 22:59:05 |
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fuck you, you are the faggot with no life so go suck someone else, 1/10 |
| 2005-10-01 05:34:31 |
Quadruplets-Part 2
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man that is sum gr8 gr8 work u have thr .. i wud like to suggest as many of my fellow readers wud to continue the story by letting the parents join in the sex and all six of them have a wonderful time togeher .. and then u can explain y their father built that shower ... amazing work 10/10 .. |