| 2006-05-08 21:07:02 |
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a new 1 in my top 5!!!!! good job keep up the writing |
| 2006-05-09 12:33:41 |
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very good.. continue on... start of a good story line.. |
| 2006-05-10 13:58:28 |
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I NEVER RESPOND 2 ANY STORIES I'VE READ, BUTT THIS ONE IS GGGGGGREAT! |
| 2006-05-10 15:21:37 |
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OOOH, BY THE WAY, YOU'RE FIRED!!!
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THE GAP |
| 2006-05-11 15:46:11 |
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your hired..........
Guess |