| 2005-10-01 19:54:12 |
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looking at the comments, I see so many people read these short glimpses of life and fantasy, as if it has to fit their own mold.. My self I look at the story , the writing, and then my personal feelings.. Well Written,, On trick I find useful when writing, is to go back and take out all the unnessary words.. It tightens up the thoughts and story line.. Very good.. thanks. |
| 2005-10-01 20:27:00 |
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wtf is wrong with you, no other writer has so many feedbacks on comments, seems like you cant stand some bad comments and respond to everyone of them, probably using different aliases. get real, not that many users leaving those same type comments, 1/10 for this stupid story |
| 2005-10-02 00:12:02 |
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Wtf???? I don't think the author is doing this lot of fuckups out here just playing wanting to start shit and keep it going I believe this because I write on this site under a different name and have been accused of all the same things With crazy comments on my stories too Don't want to make you mad just telling you what I've seen |
| 2005-10-02 11:48:16 |
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cant believe this, as last comment from person said, this is looking very funnt now to me also. too many comments all saying same thing then you use another name to answer, of course, if you are someone else then you would not see this reply would you? I mean, why would someone other than author keep looking at same story over and over, get real, 1/10 |
| 2005-10-02 16:29:55 |
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Why........... because we have some other authors out here And I will not mention their names....rating stories down to help promote their own simple as that................ |