| 2005-10-05 19:47:50 |
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dude seperate the story...add quotes....add paragraphs...stop being a bad writer....5/10 for content |
| 2005-10-05 20:57:18 |
Babysitting_(0)
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Great srory!!!!!!!! some paragraphs and punctuation would be nice but keep writing like that if its all you can do! amazing |
| 2005-10-05 21:56:56 |
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HEY! YOU LITTLE FUCK NUGGET! I saw this story on another site. You stole it! I don't know what's worse, the fact that you stole it, or the fact that you didn't fix it! |
| 2005-10-06 21:03:39 |
Babysitting_(0)
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good story |
| 2005-10-07 01:20:07 |
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Learn to use the fucking return key, Jesus, where did you go to school? |