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Comments from READER
Date | Story title | Comment |
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2005-10-05 10:29:43 | Raping Leigh | I have to aggree with some other comments. Leaving her on the table was just a dumb move. Also, if you want to write a story about teens, have them behave like teens. No fifteen year old girls is going to beg for cum all over her face. Not to many grown women beg for it, and I've known some freaky chicks. I'm not saying you can't write a charachter that begs for it, but lets try and keep it in the realm of reality. This wasn't a terrible story, it just wasn't that good. Keep trying. -S- |
2005-10-05 13:21:28 | Raping Leigh | your mum |
2005-10-10 13:00:00 | Raping Leigh | I would guess that the author is 15 years old, has a 3 inch dick and has never been with a girl in his life (except maybe his mother) |
2005-10-13 04:09:18 | Raping Leigh | i think those first two fucks who read it were the only ones to like it |
2005-10-16 12:29:56 | Raping Leigh | Rapes good you all are dumb asses. you didn't have to read it you know. |