| 2005-10-05 21:25:44 |
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well !!!!!!!!! very hot ~~ hotgal...you did a great job to the details .... and not bad for a first timer in writting~~~a girl can only dream of a cock the size of mikes~~~i loved the story but some of the pain was a bit much for me....but i did enjoy the edginess of the story...please continue to write, you have a good way with words... |
| 2005-10-06 00:17:38 |
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dude this story sucked don't ever post another storie ever again. 1/10 |
| 2005-10-06 16:06:24 |
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thier is nothing erotic about this story...but I did like reading it...and next story go easy on using the word "hot"..jeeze |
| 2005-10-06 21:01:51 |
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Bloody hell, that story was hot, every woman would love cocks that size entering their bodies and only a guy would say its shit cause he's got a small dick, size does matter......... I loved the way they dropped her on their dicks, in both holes, damn, how hot is that, i'm getting wet just thinking about it. I love having my tits bitten and hoes fisted, maybe u guys who were negative need to experiment abit more and maybe get more adventurous, I kgive it 10/10, Not bad for a first story, can't wait to read the next one now. |
| 2005-10-12 00:26:05 |
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Mmmmm........ guess wat? I actually print this out and finger fuck myself......... I love the idea of being gang bang, but never tried before.......... This story makes me very horny.......... I like your story, makes me reads to my orgsam....... Thanks for that..... write more please....... |