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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-10-05 21:11:48 | Brad's first time, five years later | short... |
| 2005-10-05 23:57:53 | Brad's first time, five years later | To fucken short. Learn to wright. 2/10 |
| 2005-10-06 03:26:59 | Brad's first time, five years later | This had potential but there was very little real build up, and the dialogue was flawed. 3/10, work on your dialogue and use more description in the sex scenes, from the lotion on the anus to the end of the story was quicker than it would have taken to lotion up the anus. Be mindful of timing. |
| 2005-10-06 07:03:59 | Brad's first time, five years later | good story, and very nice grammer, but im gonna have to say that your story was too short. perhaps it would be a good idea to couple this wi the 1st story, and resubmit them. then you would get less negative critisism. kk its just an idea cya and keep on writting! |
| 2005-10-06 07:31:30 | Brad's first time, five years later | Angie should be able to have Brad visit her in the other town so she can use him up. |